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True Relation

True relation

Needs no messiah

Just millions of people

Learning together

They’ll build no temples

But they do have a shrine

This beautiful planet Earth

Home to humans kind

Blind ambition

A thing of the past

New community created

Designed to last

There’ll be no popes

There’ll be no kings

With mutual understanding

No need for these things

There will be great teachers

But no need for a throne

The leaders of this movement

Content to work from home

The answers are all around us

They’re just not obvious

The great majority

Kept oblivious

Yet slowly there’s awakening

Slowly all can learn

That life’s great triumphs

Are never what we own

They’re how we raise our families

Connect with our peers

How we treat the weakest souls

Who’ve known little more than tears

Revert to the Stone Age??

I hear the cynics say

To create such utopia

Give everything away!!

Not sure what it would look like

Nothing important needs to go

Just hatred and greed

And untamed ego

Kindness the main mantra

Compassion and empathy

As we let go of the hold

Grief’s had on you and me

We’ll tread easy on the planet

Food and most goods locally

Keep waste to minimum

End consumerist folly

I’m sure it won’t be easy

I’m sure many will resist

Contentment of early responders

An inspiration to the rest

There won’t be other chances

We don’t really have a choice

There is no planet next

So let’s hear your voice

Raised up and overwhelming

A clarion of love

For every living thing

The mighty peace dove

❤️🙏❤️

Stephen Treloar May,2023.

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Susan T's avatar

I grew up in a small rural village. When people were horrible, it really stood out. When other kids threw horse buns at the Dutch kid that just moved there, some of us knew that was wrong. We had beauty all around us. The streams, the deer, the birds, the trees. People were not always beautiful though. Aside from the horse bun throwers, some of the older boys sped through town in their cars screaming obscenities from the window. I think those must be the people that grew up to be our so called "leaders". They bullied their way into power by pretending they represented "human nature".

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